Editorial Peer Edits

Katie Baldwin

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes, her position is for using alternative energy and resources.

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
Yes, the problem and solution are both stated very clearly and are backed up by good arguments.

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
Yes, it addresses the issue from both sides but still provides a clear position on the issue.

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
Yes, it is very interesting as it is a prominent issue in the U.S. today.

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes, the whole editorial is organized very well.

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes, each paragraph provides another point to back up the thesis.

7. Is the writing clear?
Yes, it is very clear. Very well written.


Kelly Brown

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes, the author is against the genocide taking place due to oil issues in other countries.

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
Yes, the author presented the issue and a possible solution to the issue.

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
No.

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
Yes, it is very interesting. It is a topic that many people are interested in today.

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
Yes.

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes.

7. Is the writing clear?
Yes, the writing is very well done and easy to understand.